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hmm

It could be heavier. Was it your intention for it to be so light and sparkly? If so then it comes off better for it.

The kick rolls later on sort of came off a little disjointed.

This track would make such an awesome heavy mix. Add some actual bass, heavier drums, fuzzier lead synths and effects. It'd be fantastic.

It is what it is as it is, and I get the feeling you wanted it to be this way so, gj on that. i guess.

Certainly not polished

Well, it's certainly very first or second try. I recommend using something other than 808 sounds, or FL template sounds.

Stretch out on google and look up some free samples. This track could stay exactly as it is but still benefit greatly from using more solid samples.

Or, if you were to stay with these samples, experiment with effects and mastering to make it sound a little less clunky and a little more polished and original.

Stormfucker responds:

Thanks for your advice! I will try next time to put more effort into the song and try to make my next track more refined.

Interesting

Not quite my cup of tea. I like the beat. The instrument choice makes it sound like it was made with a 15 year old Yamaha keyboard. The mix was pretty good, nothing was glaring or too loud. or too quiet or really anything. mix was spot on.

Keep it up ;]

Nightschaoswalker responds:

thanks. im really new so im kind of just testing some things =] but your absolutely right.

I make music, I've tried flash myself and failed. So for now I'll stick to music. I really want to score video games as a career, so this place may be a good start methinks ;]

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